I purchased your Kopywriting Kourse and I’m blown away with all the great tips. I did an example and wanted to get feedback. It’s for Vicks Warm Steam Vaporizer.

ATTENTION:
It’s 3:15 in the morning
You’re stuffed up
You have a fever
You’re aching
It’s official, you’re sick.
You’re taking a bunch of stuff, you can’t afford another sick day
INTEREST
Enter Vicks Warm Steam Vaporizer
Delivering warm moist air to help clear your passageways
Add Vaposteam Inhalant for even better results
DESIRE
You need warm moist air to breathe in
You’re closer to a Vicks Warm Steam Vaporizer than a rain forest.
Available everywhere.
ACTION
Get yours today.

Much thanks!

It was a little tough to get a company to agree with drop shipping, so I did my business in reverse I guess you could say. I contacted several companies that I wanted to do drop shipping for me, none would agree, as their margins were pretty thin already, and they didn’t see how they would benefit.

So I went ahead and used one of these stores online anyway. I started taking orders with my prices marked up a little, and had the items delivered to my address at first. I contacted the company again, after I had made a few sales, and they came back and agreed that I was providing them additional sales they weren’t getting. I talked to the president, and he is now allowing me to use a discount code, and placing my business cards with the products that ship out from my sales.

The one thing that you said about doing SEO sounded too simple – using specific file names, adding content, ‘BUILDING A MOAT”- but its amazing! I can search for the product and model names that I carry, and my store ranks right up on top of most searches. Even well above my drop shipper, if they even show up. And I haven’t paid for any adwords or any marketing. I just followed you advice about SEO, it really is that simple and works very well! This was a big reason my drop shipper agreed, was that my products could be found easier than theirs.

Thanks again man! I’m already thinking about my next online store :)

It’s a hard thing to admit, but I’m a copywriter in search of help from a better copywriter.
Don’t tell anyone.

Waiting to hear from you.
Thanks.

I get nothing but SEO companies telling me how shit I’m running nev-blog! (I actually work in SEO myself and I can’t see anything wrong with this website)

But please sort out an email address for the spam mate – I’m already having to create a new email address to end the rein of spam but I’m hesitant about commenting on here in the future!

Thanks mate

What’s good yo? I just read your interview on Mixergy with Andrew. I loved it loved it loved it loved it. Good stuff on there especially since there was real actionable stuff on there not just some theoretical bullshit (I’ve been using AIDA in my communication for the past week, well see how that works out). Either way get in touch with me if you need a disciple. I can be a shaman monk for you helping you with anything you need if you trade me some actionable business advice. My specialties include financial analysis/modeling and overall accounting. You will not be disappoint